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Lately I don’t wanna go to sleep
Tired eyes but all they do is weep
I write these words that rhyme
To pass away bed time
Cuz lately I don’t wanna go to sleep

These days I don’t really wanna eat
Full because I swallowed my defeat
I write these words that rhyme
To pass away meal time
Cuz these days I don’t really wanna eat

My legs don’t seem to wanna walk
Stubborn brain and body still won't talk
I write these words that rhyme
To pass away still time
Cuz my legs don’t seem to wanna walk

No longer do I rock-out in the shower
It’s just become another silent hour
I write these words that rhyme
To pass away mute time
Cuz no longer do I rock-out in the shower
©2009 *LoveMeKnot
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Author's Comments

The language is slangy -- I think it adds to the mood -- let me know if you feel I should use proper 'because' and 'want to' instead.

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